"What's Wrong With Your Website?"

“Watch Onscreen As An Online Marketing Expert Reviews Every Single Page Of Your Website… and Demonstrates Tested, Scientific Methods to Give You the Most Compelling, Highest-Converting Site Possible!” "Now You Can Generate All The New Leads You Can Handle, Turn Them Into Buyers and Turn Your Website into a Money Machine!"	Bill Hibbler Master Site Reviewer

From: Bill Hibbler
Time: Tuesday, 11:26 AM
Re: Your Website

Dear Internet Marketing Friend,

1. Is your website less productive than what you expected when you launched it?                                                                                            YES   NO
   
   

2. Would you like to convert more of your visitors into customers eager to whip out their credit cards and place an order?                                     YES   NO
   
   

3. Would you like to immediately double or triple the amount of money you earn from each customer?                                                          YES    NO
   
   

4. Are you furious that you spent a lot of time and money to get a site you’re not happy with?                                                                                    YES    NO
   
   

5. Would you like to fix common mistakes on your site that are killing your online business?                                                                                    YES    NO
   
   

If you answered YES to any of the above, you’ll want to DEVOUR every word of this letter. Whether you designed your website yourself, built it using a template or hired an expensive web designer, this article will completely turn your website around.

Or perhaps you have a brand-new site and would like to get it checked out before you invest a lot of time and money on promotion. Either way...

A poorly designed website can cost you sales and hurt your credibility.

You probably put up your website without knowing exactly what to do. Or you hired a designer that was focused more on graphics than the sales copy. The sad fact is few website designers know how to build a site that sells.

Web designers seem to think that your sales message is less important than logos and pretty pictures. They love high-tech things like animations, little intro movies and fancy navigation menus. Well, fancy animations don’t generate income… except for the web designer. In fact, they frequently drive visitors away.

Clearly, people online are in a BIG hurry. More than likely, they didn’t get online to go shopping. They came to your website seeking information or a solution to a problem.

You have a tiny amount of time to convince visitors that your product or service is the solution they need. If your website doesn’t demonstrate that solution, FAST, they’re gone. That’s why fancy animations and graphics just get in the way.

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"What Can Be Done To Fix My Website?"

How would you like it if you had total control over the amount of business you have each week? Imagine having effective systems for getting new customers, generating more sales from existing ones and no longer being at the mercy of the economy.

The good news is your website can easily be fixed so it starts to generate sales. All the money-losing mistakes can be corrected. In some cases, your site might need a complete makeover but… sometimes a quick tweak or a few simple changes in your sales copy is all it takes to breathe new life into your website.

To discover and fix the problems on your website, you’ve got three options:

1. Hire a professional copywriter to write new sales copy for your website. A good copywriter can do wonders for your site’s sales… however, you’ll pay $10,000 to $25,000 or more PLUS a percentage of the profits! That’s probably not what you have in mind.

2. Ask friends, family or someone on an online marketing discussion board to take a look at your site. That can be somewhat useful. A different set of eyes can often pick up things like typos or other simple mistakes. The problem is their feedback will be based on their opinion and not on proven, tested techniques. Plus, it’s unlikely they’re going to spend more than a few minutes looking over your website.

   Also, friends, family and even ‘strangers’ on a forum will hold back because they’re afraid of hurting your feelings. That’s perfectly understandable but it’s not going to help your website. You want a site review that’s not going to hold anything back.

3. Find a company offering a site review service. You pay a company to have a look at your site and give you their opinion on what’s wrong with it. On the surface, it seems like the perfect solution. There’s only one problem… the vast majority of firms offering this service are website design companies.

   That’s like getting the fox to watch the hen house! Oh they’ll point out problems on your website alright. Can you imagine what they’ll recommend?

   “Well, for $3,000 we’ll redo all your graphics, we’ll make a custom logo that spins around and you simply must have a cool $2,000 20-second flash intro when people come to your site! And for another $1,000, we can have the latest news headlines scroll across your site while music plays in the background.’’ --Pretty scary, isn’t it?

So what do you do if you realize you need a pro but don’t want to take out a second-mortgage to hire a copywriter or graphic designer for a bunch of useless bells and whistles?

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Hire a Master Site Reviewer and Turn Your Website Into a 24 Hour-A-Day Moneymaker.

Imagine a service where you could get exactly what you want…

• Help with your sales copy without paying thousands of dollars for a top copywriter.

• Suggestions for design changes, if needed, but with tips for finding designers at rock-bottom prices with no heavy sales pitch.

• A thorough review and critique of your website by a pro that understands what makes a website sell using tested, scientific methods.

• Being able to watch over their shoulder on video as they go through every page of your site.

I'm sure you'll agree that a service like this would be extemely valuable, right? Well, I've got great news... your website worries are over.

Hi. My name is Bill Hibbler. I specialize in critiquing websites and have a proven system that I’d like to put to work for you. Many of my clients wouldn’t dream of putting up a new website without letting me review it to insure it’s geared for maximum profits.

Joe Vitale is recognized as one of the top copywriters in the world. His clients pay a minimum of $12,500 for a sales letter. Joe recently asked me to critique a website he was about to launch. Read Joe’s feedback after reading my review:

"Over $4,100 in 3 Days" "I've been a copywriter for well over twenty-five years, but Bill took one look at a letter I had already reviewed and saw the weakness in the headline that I missed. I'm embarrassed but grateful. We corrected the headline per Bill's wise advice and ended up making over $4,100 in 3 days from a simple e-book. Bill is brilliant at finding the weak areas in sites, which means he can help you transform your site into a money-maker. Hire him and listen to him."     Joe Vitale President, Hypnotic Marketing, Inc. www.MrFire.com

See, even a top-notch copywriter likes to get a second opinion before launching a new website. You should, too… and if I can help someone like Joe Vitale, imagine what I can do for you.

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I recently put together a service called "The Internet Marketing Audit!" This service gives you practical, step-by-step tools you need to increase your sales and profits right now. It's a complete bottom-line oriented analysis and review of your website, your Internet marketing and advertising strategies and is designed for fast, measurable results.

Hire me to critique your website and you’ll see how to quickly and easily…

• Tweak your site for maximum gains with minimum cost and effort. So you get the most out of your ad dollars.

• Get rid of common web design mistakes that drive visitors away.

• Find your site’s weak spots that need to be edited or eliminated.

• Evaluate your headlines. A change in your headline can produce increases in sales of 200%, 400% and even over 1,000% in some cases.

• Identify which of your site’s pages are most effective and why.

• & Much, much more...

Pat O’Bryan is fairly new to selling online but he’s become a marketing machine. If you’ve read Pat’s book, “The Myth of Passive Income,” you know what a skeptic he is. Yet, see what he had to say after I reviewed his website…

"The Conversion Ratios Are Great and I Made $5742 in the First 25 days!" "Before I released “The Myth of Passive Income,” I asked Bill Hibbler to review the sales site. I’m glad I did. His clear-sighted perspective and insightful comments made the difference between an “also ran” sales letter and a winner. My affiliates LOVE the sales page, the conversion ratios are great, and I made $5742 in the first 25 days! I wouldn’t dream of releasing a product without consulting with Bill, and I’d recommend you do the same." Pat O'Bryan MythOf PassiveIncome.com

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When you hire me, you’ll get the same top-notch critique that helped Pat O’Bryan turn his site into a winner.

The key area I’ll focus on is how to generate more leads and convert more of your visitors into customers. Some of the areas I’ll look at include:

• Check your usability and layout so you don't confuse (and lose) visitors.

• Help you build a stronger long-term relationship with your customers so you can increase repeat purchases.

• How to decrease your site’s download time and capture an extra 33% of your visitors.

• Help you clearly demonstrate your credibility and build trust.

• Examine your shopping-cart system to reduce abandoned carts plus show you the magic word that MUST be on your order form.

• Carefully analyze your initial offer to maximize sales.

• Help determine and prioritize your site’s objectives

• Make sure you’re addressing your target market so you don’t waste ad dollars.

And you don’t just get some 30-page laundry list of problem areas written out in geek-speak that you have to hire a web designer to interpret. You get something far more useful…

Watch ‘Over My Shoulder’ As I Review Your Website On-Screen.

You get to follow along as I pore over every inch of your website, line by line, page by page. It’s like having me right there in front of your computer going over your site. Except that you won’t have to pay me my full day consulting rate, which is $1,500 plus expenses.

You’ll be able to watch the videos as often as you like. And any suggestions and recommendations I make will be crystal clear.

I’ll warn you in advance, when it comes to reviewing your website, I’ll be brutally honest. I hold nothing back. In fact, take a look at what Empowerment Café’s Daryl Snyder had to say…

"Awesome Results For Our Business" "Bill Hibbler and his site reviews and consultation were of more value than any other I have found on the Internet. He is very direct. He has pointed our business in the right direction and his insight and proven, tested suggestions (not just ideas he thinks might work) continue to create awesome results for our business. If you're serious about creating money with your Internet business you can't afford not to have Bill review your site." Daryl Snyder Chief Empowerment Officer EmpowermentCafe.com

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You've read the rave reviews from some very successful marketers. Now it's time to have a look for yourself. I’ve got a clip from an Internet Marketing Audit recorded in August. You’ll see me review a Lo Benedict's Turnkey Masterpiece Package sales letter. Lo's had just launched his new membership site featuring resale rights products and he wanted to make sure his website converted as many visitors as possible into paying customers. You’re about to watch a short excerpt from the critique that was actually over three hours long.

Watch An Ugly Duckling Website Transform Into a Swan Click on the button below to watch a portion of the recent site review I did for Lo Benedict's Turnkey Masterpiece Package. You'll see me examine the website's graphics, headlines, guarantee, order form and more. Then watch as I completely transform the website turning it into a lean, mean selling machine. You can also click on the links to the right to get a 'before' and 'after' peek at the rewrite and makeover of Lo's site. NOTE: If you use any type of pop-up blocker or are unable to use the button above, click here. Click Here to See "Before" Click Here to See "After"

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During this critique... --- You'll get specific strategies on how to improve your website. I’ll also discuss how to best market your business. Plus you'll learn what promotions and costly marketing mistakes to avoid.

The three areas I look at are...

1. How to generate customer inquiries and get new customers.

2. How to get your existing customers to come back more often.

3. How to increase the value and profit of each sale you make.

Along with the critique video you get a prioritized action plan. It contains the most important things you should do to immediately start increasing your business. It may take you several months to apply it all.

You also get a copy of the full review on CD-ROM. By watching it several times you'll come up with your own ideas sparked by both the critique and the action plan. This will become the basis of your marketing plan and future promotional strategies!

Earlier, you saw a 15-minute video excerpt from Lo Benedict's site review. Read what Lo had to say after seeing the entire 3+ hour video...

"Your Review Video Is Simply Too Addictive" Bill, I have to take off my hat to you. Your review video is simply too addictive. I can't help myself from viewing it over and over again. I am amazed at how quickly you could pinpoint any weaknesses on my site and transform them to advantages. Implementation of all these little details will definitely increase my sales as soon as I put them on the site. I am especially impressed by the part where you stress how to minimize my refund rate. Great strategy!!! I can't say this enough... if you are looking for an experienced direct response copywriter that makes words dance, Bill is the one. Lo Benedict TurnkeyInternetProfits.com/master.html

"So What Can Be Done To Help MY Online Business?"

Depending on what type of site you have, here are some of the specific strategies you may get in this critique:

• Promotions to build your image in the marketplace and keep your name in front of your customers and prospects - while making profitable sales.

• Strategies for getting new customers and systems to keep them coming back and buying more from you.

• A Zero-Cost, Easy-To-Implement Order-Page Tactic I Personally Used to Increase my Average Sale-Per-Customer by a Whopping 66.2%!

• Advice on how to get the most out of your existing web pages, email communications, pay-per-click campaigns and any other online promotional material you may have.

• A simple addition to your order fulfillment system that will create a flood of customer testimonials in your inbox.

• Plus much, much more...

Sometimes, because you are too close to your business, it's hard to see how to improve your results without working harder or longer. That's why this feedback will be so powerful. Craig Perrine has made generated six-figure sales online with Nitrolistbuilder.com and is a popular speaker at Internet marketing seminars. Read what Craig had to say after I reviewed his site, AffiliateBootcamp.com...

"I’m excited and feel good about the project again." "Bill, your feedback on my site was dead on. I knew something was not quite right…and you instantly put your finger on it and a few things I never would have noticed. I’m excited and feel good about the project again. After watching you laser in on exactly what needs to be tweaked or changed with such profitable results on other people’s websites…it was a no brainer to ask you for help. You have a gift…and the way you present the review is pure genius and immediately useful. Nicely done! I’ll be back on my next project so try to save me a spot in your waiting list. " Craig Perrine AffiliateBootCamp.com

Craig is an excellent copywriter but he's also a smart marketer. He realizes that it's hard to objectively evaluate your own website. By analyzing what you’re doing now online, I'll be able to see what over-looked windows of opportunities you have, and you'll get strategies to take advantage of these opportunities.

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How Long Does It Take?

First, you fill out a brief questionnaire, give me the address of your website and send me copies of all your email sales letters and follow-up messages. I then analyze your information and the materials you send me, and I’ll send you a quote for the critique.

Once you accept the quote, you’ll make your payment and I’ll place you in the next available time-slot. Then, I'll follow-up with some additional questions that you can answer online to help me understand your business better. After that, I’ll begin your video critique which you’ll be able to view online.

The entire process usually takes about two to three weeks. The actual time varies based on reviews scheduled ahead of yours.

If you’re in a hurry and need your review in less than the typical turnaround time, express service is available for an additional surcharge.

I’ll Find A Dozen Problems (and Their Solutions) Or Your Site Review is Free

I can’t guarantee a specific conversion ratio or specific dollar figure in sales. In fact, it would be illegal for me to do so.

I guarantee that I’ll find at least a dozen problem areas involving your website’s sales or lead conversion or usability problems. If not, your site critique is free. So, if I only find 11 problems, you’ll get the full site review and I’ll give you a full refund.

Assuming I do find a dozen problem areas, you’ve got a full 30 days to put my recommendations to the test. If you’re not completely satisfied, contact me any time within 30 days of receiving your critique and I’ll critique your site again free.

The cost of the Internet Marketing Audit varies depending on the size and scope of your website. A mini-site (single page sales letter with minor supporting pages (About Us, Contact, FAQ) usually runs $297. Larger sites or critiques involving autoresponder series, promotional material reviews and other materials are higher. I can also rewrite some or all of your web copy.

Speaking of price, read what Nerissa Oden, the author of "The Ultimate Guide to Free Video Editing Software" had to say about her site review…

"Well Worth the Charge... So Much Information!" "You really picked the site apart which is good because I know I got my money's worth. As I scoured your review this weekend… you gave so much information! The money I spent is well worth the charge. Your suggestions were dead right!"     Nerissa Oden FreeVideoEditing.com

So, let's start with the first step right now - me researching your website and how you market and promote your Internet business, as I mentioned before. If, after seeing your site and analyzing your response to the questionnaire, I don't feel I can help you, we will not proceed with the critique, and you owe nothing. So act now. Click here to fill out the FREE Website Evaluation form.

"Sounds Like Exactly What I Want! How Do I Get A Quote?"

Are you ready to control the amount of business you have each week? Are you ready to have effective systems for getting new customers, keeping your existing ones and for generating extra cash-on-demand? Then click here to get your free no-obligation website evaluation.

Since I review each website personally, I can take on only a limited amount of site critique projects at a time. If you want to turn your site into a consistent winner, then fill out the form below right away.

All the best,

Bill Hibbler
Master Site Reviewer

P.S. Remember, the average site review is three to four hours long. I review each website personally, giving you my personal attention. So, I only have time for a limited number of site reviews and makeovers each week. So, please don't hesitate... take the first step now and get your free website evaluation.

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